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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1612369  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Pineapple Hill
Freeform description of a ride on a steep hill
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Pain ...
The searing heat of frozen winter inhalations
Blistering his bronchioles the
Icy, crystal needlepoints of perspir-
Ation on his now-hunched shoulderblades the
Haemorrhagic vesselbursting pounding of his heart-
Beat then the
Coasting,
Flying
Journey to the
Bottom of the hill.
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