beach haikus

a quiet lagoon
the mermaids sit in shallows
combing hair with shells



the sandcastle stands
the wave come in and knocks it
the flag floats away


a magical lake
a school below the surface
waiting to be caught


a hollow beach waits
stones cover it and I know
laughter won't be heard


so, what do you think? greatly appreciate all reviews, constructive criticism, even your rude remarks....I don't care, it all helps! Put a smiley face down at the end and I'll be happy :)
p.s. I'm only 13, so don't think these are the best in the world...or these are soooo terrible...