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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Adult >> ID #1615638  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
SNOB
I wrote this after coming home from a night out with the girls, we're cruel in numbers.
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Forgive me, King, sir—
For being such a witch,
When you said Hi,
All I had to do was reply…
Instead I huffed and sighed,
Hoping you would run and hide,
Instead you said, how offended you were,
My demeanor was rude and un-civil…
You offered me a rose, apologized, and stood, sorely,
You held your head high and walked away, soldierly…
In a moment of despair, with desperate measures, I should have cried,
Instead I snubbed you without a reply…
If I had another, do it again chance,
I wouldn’t huff and puff, instead I would ask YOU for a dance…
Please accept my apologetic reply,
Next time, if there is a next; I’ll just say back to you—Hi.
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