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![]() She forsook innocence and succumbed to passion, withdrawing her defense to follow the fashion without understanding what yen was demanding. She sits staring into a watery abyss with no future in view beyond the precipice. After all that crying, now, living or dying? Shedding the bonds of guilt, she’s ready to atone and hopes trust can be built as inner voices moan, “You never count the cost with all the choices lost.” Reflections of her past weigh upon her spirit. She is now an outcast but no more will fear it. She seeks absolution for her soul’s pollution. She asks forgiveness there, remembering her sin and repenting in prayer so healing can begin. Conversion will take time, but penance is sublime. Let’s all pray with her, too. Another time or place, that sinner could be you attempting to erase blasphemy’s ugly stain and stop all Satan’s gain. Author’s note: The name of this form along with the Satanic symbolism of its structure seemed appropriate for this theme of the devil’s attempt to capture a soul. The Diablo is six stanzas of six rhymed lines with six syllables in each line. Here is an example by its creator:
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