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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1623450  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Ocean
Sometimes you cant win against the pain
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I am swimming in an ocean
An ocean of my own tears
Swimming in the sadness
The sadness of my own pain
The strokes of my strength are getting weaker
The ocean is taking over me
I m drowning in misery
It’s getting a bit crowded in here
I tell myself maybe it’s about time that I should give in to the waves of pain
I am crying out for help
But no one can hear my plea
I hear the ocean calling out to me
Calling out that its best to stop fighting this strong hold of sadness
My inner demons have won
I muster up the last stroke of courage
But the ocean is way too strong for me
I have lost control
Submerging in to the ocean I cry out for help
But it’s too late to save me
Because now I am forever lost in the darkness
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