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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Entertainment >> ID #1632105  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Daily Haiku 02jan10 - old/biddy
Two girls leave Metro train and an old woman gets on...
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old (familiar haiku)


train pushes people

into blue seats, two girls leave...

old woman climbs on






biddy (modern haiku)


                                                 train travel

                                                           girls leave warm seats

                                                                     as biddy slips on



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