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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Nature >> ID #1635024  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Daily Haiku 11jan10 - snowplows
The sound of snowplows scraping as I look through an ice-filigreed window...
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snowplows (familiar form)


                                                 the scrape of snowplows

                                                           as i look out the window

                                                                     through prism of ice





snowplows (modern form)


                                                                     snowplows scrape

                                                           close to the window...

                                                 breath fogs the glass



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