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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Personal >> ID #163971  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Cast a Thought
open to more than just friendship
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         Cast a Thought

close your curtains, sigh, weary of the world
"what else is there to do?" you wonder
and sneak a quick peek with baited line
you cast your idea & I swallow the hook

now all the discontentment,
futility, and resentment that you feel -
you can take it out on me,
because I love you
and if your feelings are a sin
then dammit I deserve your punishment too.
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