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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Dark >> ID #1640002  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Daily Haiku 27jan10
At winter twilight beyond a lone weeping willow rail cars move in the switching yard...
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getting dark early;

a train cries in the railyard...

lone weeping willow

                                                                               (familiar form)



                                                           quick twilight

                                                           moving train sounds

                                                           beyond the crying tree

                                                                               (modern form)



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