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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Holiday >> ID #1640407  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
MY UNEXPECTED EXTRA GUESTS!
who invited HER?
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NEW PROMPT: Today is your birthday and everyone's at your house for a birthday blast. The doorbell rings and you open it to find 8 squirrels with presents expecting to be invited in. Write a short story or poem about what happens next!

MY UNEXPECTED EXTRA GUESTS!


I planned a birthday party
to celebrate MY way
'cause everybody knows it--
my day's a HOLIDAY.

My guest list was in order;
even included cats.
They would have felt so left out--
we couldn't have had that!!

Some enterprising small pet
decided to be cute;
invited 8 brown squirrels;
who brought me LOTS of loot!

They came and rang my door-bell
just wanting to get in!!
But like all squirrels, they SMELLED;
the fun could not begin.

I threw them in the bathtub,
and they were horrified.
The cats, they started to scrub
the squirrels; made them cry!

My party had a slow start;
my guests were clean and mad.
But once we started eating,
a super time we had!



































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