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Lets go to the club instead
Friends share a drink without any guilt.
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“I know it was last minute. I could just not bring myself to trust Riley. “

“I’m soooo glad you did. I would much rather be here with you, than in some woods looking for a fight.”

“Do you know he broke into her house to steal her stuff just so we could ‘Get a whiff’ of her.”

“I KNOW! That’s not the worst part though. I actually held it to see if I could get an idea of, ‘why’ we were supposed to go. You would not believe it, but think we will meet her, though not for the same reasons and definitely not as an enemy.”

“So you think she will factor in to our lives somehow?”

“Absolutely.”

“So how did you find this place?”

“Well, you know when I told you I met someone else like us that wasn’t our normal crowd?”

“Oh, yah”

“Well, I thought I would keep it a secret. I really didn’t like the others. You, though. I couldn’t let you take off. This is a special place……. Bartender! Another round, Please.”

“This place is great! I don’t feel at all guilty about drinking my fill here.”

“I know.”

“This is the best 0 negative I have ever had. I would have never guessed a couple of months ago, that Vampires ran the blood bank.”

****Written for the Dialog 500 contest.
****Prompt Change in plans
****Word count including the bottom comments: 239.
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