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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1643573  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
STILL ENOUGH "INSIGHT" TO INCITE
fury, after all these years
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New Prompt! Write a poem or story about "insight" or "oversight".
Have fun!

ENOUGH "INSIGHT" TO INCITE!

She always pretended
to possess total insight
into my soul, into my heart;
that unauthorized, incorrect,
so-called observation
was so completely intrusive and
out-of-touch with who I was,
with who I wanted to be,
that it did not even come
close to who I have become,
despite her nurture.
She had enough misguided
insight that she can still incite
fury in my soul
far longer than our relationship
was worth.
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