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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Entertainment >> ID #1646817  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Note
This is a triolet about a special trip.
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The Note

The crisp morning air makes me shiver.
The icy water cracks beneath my feet.
I have a note I must deliver.
The crisp morning air makes me shiver.
My trip will end across the river.
The love we share makes my life sweet.
The crisp morning air makes me shiver.
The icy water cracks beneath my feet.

The form is called a triolet. It is related to the rondeau or round poem. It is an 8 line poem that has some lines that are repeated. The format uses 8 to 10 syllables.
The pattern is :
A: first line
B: second line
a: rhyme with first line
A: repeat line 1
a: rhyme with first line
b: rhyme with second line
A: repeat line 1
B: repeat line 2
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