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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Adult >> ID #1647484  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Morning Ardor
Candent cravings consume me. Form: Rhyming Alliterisen
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Morning Ardor

Candent cravings consume me.
Passion's pleasures are set free.
Whispered wanton words, "Oh God" -
Lusty, lyrical aubade!
Tumid triumph wanes at last
Carnal coitus, now past.
Sated senses supply smiles.



Notes:
An entry for "UENG Figure Skating (Winter Games) [18+]

Lexicon:
ardor ~ great warmth of feeling; fervor; passion
candent ~ glowing with heat; being at a white heat.
aubade ~ A song or poem greeting the dawn
tumid ~ affected with swelling, as a part of the body.
carnal ~ characterized by the flesh or the body, its passions and appetites
coitus ~ sex *Smile* and yes, it's three syllables co - i - tus.

Form: The Rhyming Alliterisen consists of 7 lines, with 7 syllables each, and has one alliteration in every line. The rhyme scheme as follows: aabbccd. The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming) is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and a specified number of alliterations per line. Alliteration is the succession of similar consonant sounds. They are not recognized by spelling, but rather by sounds.


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