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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1648066  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Outside of My Mind
Inspired by a song I heard on a movie called The Strangers.
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I want to go outside of my mind,
so I can play around today.
Today I need to run like the wind.

Yes, my love, you are so very kind,
so I may want to stay.
I want to go outside of my mind.

Love, oh, love, please don't let it end,
so I can do whatever I may.
Today I need to run like the wind.

Please do not put me in a bind,
so I can't have it anyway.
I want to go outside of my mind.

Just let me run and not look behind,
so I will not turn into hay.
Today I need to run like the wind.

Freedom is what I want in the end,
so I can run and play.
I want to go outside of my mind.
Today I need to run like the wind.



Note: This is my first attempt at a Villanelle. I wrote this after listening to a song playing in the background of a movie called The Strangers. I also wrote it thinking about the characters of the movie too.
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