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Jamie needs fixing, but he can't bear to give up his broken self. Entry for dialouge 500.
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“I saw it again.”

“Ah, Jamie. We’ve talked about this. You didn’t see-”

“Shuddup! I bloody well know what I bloody well saw!”

“Hey, now- don’t you use words like that! I know you think you’ve seen-”

Have seen!”

“-but that does not give you the right to speak like that! You will respect me, Jamie. I’m only trying to help you.”

“…”

“Jamie?”

“You’re trying to make me forget.”

“What do you…?”

“I heard, alright! Huh, what d’ya say now?! I know!”

“… I’m only interested in what’s best for you.”

“So, what? I don’t get a say? Why?! Because I’m young, it’s still my life! Mine!”

“…Jamie? Hey, now, it’s alright, little man.”

“Get off of me!”

“Jamie! Jamie, get back here- nurse! Nurse!”

“What is it?... Ah, I see. Shh, shhh- Jamie, just relax.”

"Don't kill me!"

"Such a fuss! Jamie... I'm not going to kill you! For heaven's sake... look, when you wake this will all be ok. You'll be fine. You'll be happy again. Don't cry, Jamie, soon it will all be over."

"I'll be gone. I don't want to be happy, I want to be me!"

"Enough. Give me your arm."

"No!"

"Jamie..."

"No. Just leave me alone!"

"..."

"What? I don't want that stupid shot!"

"Then you have my sympathy, Jamie. But I will do my job."

“Leggo! No! No, no, no, no! Ah-a!”

"See, Jamie. Better. Shhh, it's gonna be better."

“… I didn’t…didn’t even…”

“What?”

“… not even last words…”

Word count: 148
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