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A Race Down Depleted Roads
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A Race Down Depleted Roads


his weight wins a prize
of car-ordered fat,
a cost one food stamp
can't find an apple

hippo kid sweats-off
little red wagon dreams
and night frozen toes-
from the fixed-income castle?

more fat jokes will be won
in school, before he stutters.




"The Writer's Cramp 13+: Write the best story or poem in 24 hours or less and win 10,000 GPs!


Prompt: Write a story or poem about a castle, a hippo, and a little red wagon.



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