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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Family >> ID #1666004  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Most Inseparable
The unexpected ending of a relationship - a short poem.
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The cherished hope of loving people
Is being wed under church and steeple.

Being close presents no trouble,
Two who feel joy, inseparable.

But lack of familiar, true austerity
Presents a dubious opportunity –

The two might tangle, precipitate more,
And finally choose to end such war.

Stories of love and its shocking demise
Show conflict and pain, a new sunrise…

…Holds much more pleasure than staying together,
Amid this heat or stormy weather!
© Copyright 2010 Tim Chiu (UN: mirtx at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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