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Daily Haiku 23apr10
Loons mistake a paved road for a river and land...
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migrating loons land

on river of blacktop - web

feet sound slap marching


                                                                               (familiar form)



                                                 confused

                                                           loons out of

                                                                     water

                                                                               (modern form)





1655528		 ~ Not ~ Thinking ~ Haiku ~  [E]
One way to remove preconceptions, leave empty space for the multiverse to fill...
by peach



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