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Locked Within a Bottle?
A message discovered in a bottle at the shore.
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Locked Within a Bottle?

It was a great day for a stroll.
I chose the beach for it relaxes me.
Up the beach I strolled, when a bottle I found.
By chance I found this bottle while on patrol.
Was this a prize delivered by the sea?
Did it possess a message that would astound?

Alas, I read the note.
I was enthralled by the missive.
I took to heart that wondrous memo.
I returned note to bottle and set it afloat
It seemed just to be dismissive.
Returning the bottle and note set me aglow.
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