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Daily Haiku 29apr10
A train leaves at noon shaking the silence. The rumble ripples a pond...
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no shadows at noon...

sound of a locomotive

to anywhere else


                                                                               (familiar form)



                                                 midday silence...

                                                           train rumble ripples

                                                                     pond

                                                                               (modern form)





1655528		 ~ Not ~ Thinking ~ Haiku ~  [E]
One way to remove preconceptions, leave empty space for the multiverse to fill...
by peach



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