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Daily Haiku 01may10
Jackals run along a ridge, leaving little dust clouds behind...
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golden jackals lope

along swaybacked ridges; dust

puffs where each paw lands


                                                                               (familiar form)



                                                 dust cloud

                                                           trail on ridges when

                                                                     jackals run

                                                                               (modern form)





1655528		 ~ Not ~ Thinking ~ Haiku ~  [E]
One way to remove preconceptions, leave empty space for the multiverse to fill...
by peach



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