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Daily Haiku 04may10
In Humboldt State Park, deer climb out of the fog to their higher, summer range...
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cloud drops erasing

redwood valley; black-tailed deer

appear... disappear


                                                                               (familiar form)



                                                 deer quit

                                                           fog filled redwood

                                                                     valley

                                                                               (modern form)





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~ Not ~ Thinking ~ Haiku ~  [E]
One way to remove preconceptions, leave empty space for the multiverse to fill...
by peach



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