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Lesson Two - Redone
Lesson Two - Second try
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  (Hint: ALL 11 rules are represented in this Exercise)

1.  After they took their baths, the elves were sprinkled with fairy dust.

      Rule: 2

2.  On Tension's vacation, he went to see Niagara Falls, the Grand Canyon,(I’m adding it—but I can hear Daddy wincing!) and the Comma Museum.

      Rules:  6; 5

      (Hint: 2 different rules apply here.)

3.  JoDe, a New Horizons Academy student, finished her assignments before she ate.

      Rule: 4a

4.  The scruffy, black dog ate Professor Moriarty's i-pod( ) that he just bought.

      Rules: 3a; 4c

        (Hint: 2 different rules apply here.)

5.  The tall( ) army sergeant was decapitated when he entered the helicopter.

      Rule: 3b  I ‘think’ this is what you want—but I ‘feel’ it should be  The tall, army( ) because he could be a police sergeant

6.  Please put the plate, smeared with Sherry’s birthday cake, into the dishwasher before it draws flies.

      Rule: 4a

7 & 8.  Tripping over his old, blue, rocking chair, Everton spilled his drink.  Nevertheless, he rose, with dignity.

      Rules:  2; 6; 7; 4a

        (Hint: 4 different rules apply here.)

9.  Dagnabit, Jessica dropped her novella on my foot ( ) and the weight of the pages broke my toe.

      Rules: 8; 1

        (Hint: 2 different rules apply here.)

10.  Winnie‘s brother who taught High School English for thirty years refuses to help her grade these comma assignments.

      Rule: 4b

        (Hint: Winnie has more than one brother.)

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