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  >> Static Item >> Other >> Contest >> ID #1679595  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Hope is for Heaven
First place round 150 The Amazing 55 Word Story Contest
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Avg Rating: (9)
He did not hear her get out of bed. Quietly, she walked to the closet to get her packed bag. She did not breathe; she wore no shoes. Hope swelled in her chest. The floor creaked. She froze. He was there in an instant. She took her last breath. He told her this would happen.


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