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HaikuToday 06jun10
Somewhere people are thirsty. Somewhere else water wastes away…
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rising water spills

overflowing summer berm -

one broken sprinkler


                                                                               (familiar form)



broken sprinkler

soggy suburban lawn

what a waste


                                                                               (modern form)




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