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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Animal >> ID #1682411  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
HaikuToday 15jun10
A quickly moving cloud of ten thousand starlings approaches…
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ten thousand spots of

black on canvas dripping - wind

feathers approaching


                                                                               (familiar form)



ink cloud

starlings travel close

together


                                                                               (modern form)




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