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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Action/Adventure >> ID #1683033  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
HaikuToday 17jun10
A pack train makes it's own trail through flowers above the timberline…
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blossoms at their peak...

pack horse flattens flowered path...

latigo grumbles


                                                                               (familiar form)



full of flowers

alpine meadow accepts

pack train


                                                                               (modern form)




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