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HaikuToday20jun10
In the garden, picking and eating strawberries while the coffee cools…
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strawberry morning...

raw, flesh-stained fingers busy

steam from hot coffee


                                                                               (familiar form)



breakfast berries

picked and eaten while

coffee cools


                                                                               (modern form)




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