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HaikuToday 23jun10
At first glance I smell summer flowers and rotten melon…
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beginning to watch;

sweet scent of summer flowers...

fallen melon rots


                                                                               (familiar form)



look!

sweet flowers!

rotten melon!


                                                                               (modern form)




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