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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Other >> ID #1684774  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
As the River
A rondel about a river valley.
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As the river rushes by
Past the vivid green and red
Rainbow rocks along its bed
Showing white foam to the sky

Stand and listen to the cry
Of the sky-life overhead
As the river rushes by
Past the vivid green and red

Taste the scent upon the pine
Feel the earth beneath your tread
See the interwoven threads
Of the moments as they fly
And the river rushes by.

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"R & R Prompt 2 ~ Spring/Summer 2010

Prompt form: Rondel
A French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows:
ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.
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