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The Predicament
"It's a long way down" takes on new meaning. (Form: Trolaan)
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The Predicament



An old expression springs to mind -
"A fine kettle of fish" it goes.
As I hazardously hang, I find
a failure that will soon expose.

Now when you challenge gravity,
nothing should be left to fate.
Neglect is a depravity
now hanging from me like a weight.

Oh sure, I could try to ignore
or face the challenge of the scree
outcrops that high above me soar.
Onward should my focus be!

Hanging, I once more glance down;
helpless feelings won't abate.
How can I keep away a frown?
Hell! My zipper's in a downward state!


Notes
Round 4 entry in "Rhythm & Rhyme Poetry Challenge [E]
Prompt: Image
Form: Trolaan
Trolaan, created by Valerie Peterson Brown, is a poem consisting of 4 quatrains.
Each quatrain begins with the same letter. The rhyme scheme is abab.
Starting with the second stanza you use the second letter of the first line of the first
stanza to write the second each line beginning with that letter.
On the third stanza you will use the second letter on the first line of the second stanza
and write the third each line beginning with that letter.
On the fourth stanza you will use the second letter on the first line of the third stanza
and write the fourth each line beginning with that letter.


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Ken
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