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HaikuToday 28jun10
Waking up after nightfall, perfectly surrounded by flooded fields…
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lunar reflection -

doubled then doubled... again

summer is balanced


                                                                               (familiar form)



moon's mirror -

a summer field flooded

where bats eat mosquitos


                                                                               (modern form)




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