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HaikuToday 13jul10
The world's biggest thermometer is in Baker CA. 119 degrees there when I stopped to piss.
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The world's biggest thermometer is in Baker CA. It was 119 there when I stopped to piss...


summer playa dries

flakes of sand primer tilted

over stink bug houses

                                                                               (familiar form)



ground cracks

cooler down there with

little bugs

                                                                               (modern form)





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