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I Thought the Worst While You Slept it pains me to pull the weeds in our backyard with my lobster hands. the same hands that rubbed your back after every overtime shift, when sleep turned to soreness from our double beds stiff mattress not supporting your hunched shoulders or caved lungs- opened in a flat laying position indulging too much air like an exhaling blue whale that sprayed a seagull to the bottom of the sea- in time you snored out and in between notes I saw where your ring marked your finger (before it was gone) with a different color of devotion indenting your veins without your words. I used the sheets to forget my thoughts. now these tears water the flowers of our little garden, when a deep rooted weed lifted your ring into my red hands. I brushed the soil off and felt your skin with my finger tips. "The Writer's Cramp" Prompt: Write a STORY or POEM about finding something unexpected while weeding a garden. [30 lines]
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