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HaikuToday 07aug10
A warm meadow resting and Black-Eyed Susans…
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A warm meadow resting and Black-Eyed Susans…



asleep with Black-Eyed

Susans... yellow and black waves

on a field of green

                                                                               (familiar form)



meadow sleeping...

yellow flowers breathe

dreaming...

                                                                               (modern form)





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