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Playful Spirit
I'd seen someone who wasn't there ~ eyes of onyx with raven hair.
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This clearing was used by the Rideau Lakes Mississauga,
of the Ojibwe or Anishinaabe nation, for traditional
Sun Dance and other ceremonies.




Playful Spirit



Playful spirit behind an oak
laughed and flirted but never spoke.
Eyes of onyx, raven hair,
I marveled at her standing there.

Brilliant sunshine, could barely see.
Had my eyes played tricks on me?
I stood in reverence and awe
not sure of what I thought I saw.

Fluttering soft, the poplar leaves
perhaps, had caused me to believe
I'd seen someone who wasn't there --
eyes of onyx, raven hair.

The nimble spirit deftly danced
from tree to tree and lightly pranced.
I didn't know quite what to do
about this vision in my view.

I had no knowledge of such things.
What does one do when nature brings
such beauty, grace and winsome mold
who, I could see but could not hold?

I could have watched her all day long
her movements were just like a song.
She beckoned me with backward glance
down flowered pathway of romance.

I had no choice, I was entranced;
induced to follow where she danced.
The woods had changed, were foreign now,
colors brighter, surreal somehow.

I saw some spirits on the way.
They went about their normal day.
They took no notice of my form
contrary to their spirit norm.

They were at home among the trees;
conversely, I felt ill at ease.
Abandoned, then just like a snare --
eyes of onyx, raven hair.

She drew me close and hugged me tight;
we kissed, caressed throughout the night.
Not a wisp of evanescence,
but a real woman's presence.

Woodsmoke, sweet-grass, musk and cedar --
I took her hand, she let me lead her.
Beneath the boughs we made our bed
while stars shone brightly overhead.






30 September, 2010: Awarded First Place in the 70th Traditional Poetry Contest
*Delight* Thanks Monty




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