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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Nature >> ID #1700678  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
HaikuToday 19aug10
A summer cloud bursts at daybreak…
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A summer cloud bursts at daybreak…



dawn finds summer rain...

a river runs this morning

where deer ran last night

                                                                               (familiar form)



dawn

finds summer

rain

                                                                               (modern form)




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