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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1700848  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
My Loose Wheel's On A Roll!
Rolling, rolling, rolling!
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WDC Writers Cramp for 8.21.10

NEW PROMPT:
A wheel comes off a moving car...

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My Loose Wheel’s on a Roll


Some days, I feel like I’m a
loose-wheel-on-a roll,
careening off
the stable moving vehicle
of my life.
I try to make it
all come back together
like I’m on a planned journey
following a neat road map.
Some days, I am
successful,
but others,
not so much!
Today, my loose wheel
feels like
a training wheel gone askew.
Wobbling all over the place.
Taking me off
in uncharted directions
without my permission.
Gotta tighten that loose wheel
before I stray too far off
my chosen path
and wind up
somewhere
else.
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