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Second Thoughts
First place round 162 of The Amazing 55 Word Story Contest
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Ryan rushed to hospital room five. He had awakened a changed man, wanting to be a father.

"Please pick up." Cursing, he ran up the stairs two at a time.

“Sir, you can't go in there!”

Ryan ignored her.

“Julia?”

Tears fell down Julia's face as she rolled away gently, showing him the bloodied gown.





















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