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HaikuToday 01sep10
A brackish pond is a breeding ground for skeeters and topminnows…
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A brackish pond is a breeding ground for skeeters and topminnows…



topminnow feeding ~

cloud of skeeters bobs and weaves,

gone for dessert

                                                                               (familiar form)



mosquitofish ~

swing shift on

Ruffin's Pond

                                                                               (modern form)




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