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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Dark >> ID #1705512  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Shatter
i write when i feel unwanted..here's an example.please review
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Around us ones we know are falling
Strain to hear their voices calling
Beady eyes behind a mask
While souls shatter before the glass

Tiresome, what we've become
Is it too much yet?
I feel so let down

Ashes to ashes we all fall down
A descent that you reflect upon
The trigger to your gun, I am
Screw the system, life is wrong

Burning from your darkest sin
Locked away with searing skin
Silent suicidal minds will
Drown your thoughts and leave you blind!

Tiresome, what we've become
Are you aching yet?
I feel so left out

And when the world comes crashing down
To fracture and divide
Hands are tied and lives are bound
To stifle mourning cries
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