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HaikuToday 14sep10
These birds are missing punctuation, please, insert punctuation as you read.
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what happens to doves

when they vanish after crows

Kaa Kaa Kaa Kaa call

                                                                               (familiar form)



doves leapfrog

when crows call then

fly away

                                                                               (modern form)




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