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  >> Static Item >> Assignment >> Other >> ID #1712392  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
THE MORNING WATCH
twisted Freytag on the gunea watch
Rated:
E
by
Avg Rating: (1)
>> Static Item >> Poetry >> Pets >> ID #1679693 | Show Details



THE GUINEA WATCH
a true story about my cats' morning fascination!
by Jennyj (38) Avg Rating: (1)
Item Genre(s): Pets, Nature, Other
Access Restrictions: None Intro Rated: E

THE GUINEA WATCH
--a villanelle, dismembered--

My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!..
They look for neighbor’s flock of guinea fowl
Hens waddle past,calling with noisy zest!.

Cats only dream of a guinea conquest--
all they’d do if they caught one is just growl!
My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!

(They’ve only ever caught a mouse, at best!
The sight of fowl makes one timid cat howl--
Hens waddle past, calling with noisy zest!)

The march is early; causes cats their rest!
They’d like to catch one, but just don’t know how!
My five cats wake at dawn from to surprise guests!.

They study them each day with fervent zest!
as they conspire to catch the guinea fowl;
hens waddle past calling with noisy zest!


Their day has started off wrong; they have guests!
They want a young fowl captured from its nest!.
My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!
Hens waddle past, calling with noisy zest!

They’ve only ever caught a mouse, at best!
The sight of fowl makes one timid cat howl--
Hens waddle past, calling with noisy zest!


The Guinea Watch according to Freytag
========================================

conclusion

They’ve only ever caught a mouse, at best!
The sight of fowl makes one timid cat howl--
Hens waddle past, calling with noisy zest!



climax

The march is early; causes cats their rest!
They’d like to catch one, but just don’t know how!
My five cats wake at dawn from to surprise guests!.

They study them each day with fervent zest!
as they conspire to catch the guinea fowl;
hens waddle past calling with noisy zest!


Their day has started off wrong; they have guests!
They want a young fowl captured from its nest!.
My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!
Hens waddle past, calling with noisy zest!





exposition


They study them each day with fervent zest!
as they conspire to catch the guinea fowl;
hens waddle past calling with noisy zest!



rising action

My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!..
They look for neighbor’s flock of guinea fowl
Hens waddle past,calling with noisy zest!.

Cats only dream of a guinea conquest--
all they’d do if they caught one is just growl!
My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!
My five cats wake each dawn to surprise guests!..
They look for neighbor’s flock of guinea fowl
Hens waddle past,calling with noisy zest!.



falling action

They study them each day with fervent zest!
as they conspire to catch the guinea fowl;
hens waddle past calling with noisy zest!



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