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HaikuToday 30sep10
The first autumn rain takes fallen leaves away from the only home they have ever known…
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The first autumn rain takes fallen leaves away from the only home they have ever known…



not a summer rain...

newly fallen leaves set sail

from Potomac's shore

                                                                               (familiar form)



most leaves

fall in autumn

seeking sea level

                                                                               (modern form)





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