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  >> Static Item >> Short Story >> Contest Entry >> ID #1712963  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Close Call at the Mall
1st place, Round 4. 25 or less Hint fiction challenge.
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“Ray.  Glad you came by,” the manager said.  “Sorry about the mix-up.”

Ray eased his finger off the trigger of the 38 in his jacket.


WORD COUNT:  25
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