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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Action/Adventure >> ID #1720755  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
HaikuToday 30oct10
Autumn winds have long swept maple leaves away… still the wind is blowing…
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Autumn winds have long swept maple leaves away… still the wind is blowing…



autumn brisky winds

sent maple leaves somewhere else

still wind is blowing

                                                                               (familiar form)



leaves gone

wind still

blowing

                                                                               (modern form)




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