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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Melodrama >> ID #1721447  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
HaikuToday 02nov10
Does haiku need filler? LOL, please don't take this too seriously. An exercise really.
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Does haiku need filler? LOL, please don't take this too seriously. An exercise really. I get to laugh at myself.



Nature fill filler

Autumn filly fill (Ahhhh!) fill filler

Cup still warm filler

                                                                               (familiar form)



dozing in

fall-golden leaves

coffee sounds good

                                                                               (modern form)




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