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HaikuToday 09nov10
My Greyhound ate my Parakeet and left three little feathers...
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My Greyhound ate my Parakeet and left three little feathers...



bird songs were eaten

greyhound with yellow feathers

a waste of birdseed

                                                                               (familiar form)



green feathers

an empty cage

cry parakeet tears

                                                                               (modern form)





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