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HaikuToday 24nov10
School bus pulls away and crows return to eat.
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School bus pulls away and crows return to eat.



seventeen crows watch

a yellow bus stop and go;

for now, birds are home

                                                                               (familiar form)



school bus

honks and scatters crows

hunger brings 'em back

                                                                               (modern form)




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